Used from the stock pictures Misty had I wasn't sure what text to put on it so I just put emo since I don't know who this is. CnC please?
Splatters and such are good, the vector effects don't work at all though. Look up some tuts and check out other people's art. Learn some new stuff and start using more gradients, filters, smudging, and all that. Brushes shouldn't be the whole thing. Also, work on the text. Fonts like Times New Roman, Impact, and Tahoma are pretty good and you should already have them.
I must say, your rendering on this is pretty good. ;3 But like Ghetto said, the entire thing should not be brushes. Try making some other effects with smudging, pentooling, displacing, and other filters. Fancy fonts like that often look tacky, so, like Ghetto said once again, stick to basic ones like Tahoma, Times, etc. There's no real foreground here, the stock seems to be taking up a huge amount of the canvas, and you should work on coloring. Use things like Gradient Maps to make the sig match all around, color wise. Try reading some more tuts and such; you seem to be sticking with the same old style. but keep going at it. <3
What do you mean rendering like a render I didn't cut it out...I smudged it.But thanks for the CnC guys and I am going to try to change my style.
