Wow, this Is pretty good! Well, first of all I don't mind the rainbow line, but the big chunks of It everywhere annoys me, the little bits, or 'Crumbs' as I like to call them, look good. The 'Paint Splatter' or 'Blood Splatter' or whatever people call 'em, looks a bit messy when Its over the Rainbow line, the big one just under her head looks completely out of place. One thing about the rainbow line I will point out Is It looks a bit lonely, maybe add a second or third one connecting to the first? Thats pwnsome though, better then my works xD Keep up the good job!
Very nice job on this But if I were to suggest something, I would suggest changing the border. It doesn't seem to going well with the sig.
Okay, is good ¬¬ Anyways, moving on, the render is kind of bad quality, what I suggest is that you get a better one, the lines... :/, practice more with the pentool, still, is good for a first 8D, the background lacks in fx, and change the text, the border is okay. Still, is good.
