Haven't had anything critiqued in a while and since these were requests on KHI I don't feel comfortable having them commented there, so yeah. No ratings please.
The only problem that I have to say about the first one is it is extremely hard for me to read the words to the left of Sora. Other than that i think that both sigs have a food natural flow of color and theme.
1st feels dry 2nd's more substantial and eye catching. The text on the left..I know it was a part of the request - doesn't fit well with the right side. Then for the second tag - leaves a bit of a notion that I encourage you to expand your choices in fonts to have more variation in your typography. the stuff's unique. but i think it was just the stock for the first that through you off so much because it isn't something that you'd normally see have outstanding results.
Requested colors killed me in the 2nd. As for the text, I generally hate adding it to tags, but well a request is a request. Also I only have default fonts and I was not in the mood to search up fonts for 1 request :v And sup Vodka?
if you ever get in the mood to play with fonts, hit me up in that category. and lul, i totally need to get back on my requests at Stars' back on khi. and nothin much. just baking up a batch of LP's to throw into my portfolio for college. the threads showcasing them are right under this one, lmao. have a looksee.
Well I had around a 1000 fonts before and I could pull off some nice stuff, but yeah PC crashed and all that crap. Now I'm making tags with 3 wireframe renders, 1 standard render, 2 textures and some glue. I'll check out the LPs, but don't expect any serious critique, because I don't want to start bit ching about tags :v
I like the second one's depth and flow along with color variation, but the first one's brightness and illegible text is the only problem with that one. Well done overall.
I agree, the first one is very well done but the text is a little too bright and I have difficulty reading it. The second one is very well done <3 I think it's hot ;] But not in a pervy way, k? >~> The effects and the text, colors too, everything <3 Honestly, I think they are all amazing ^^ Good job :3
