Traditional Art Ego-City (Johnny)

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Xephos, Sep 14, 2008.

  1. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Well, to put it kindly, it's unrefined. The body legs are incorrectly shaped, the arm is disproportionately long, and the face is very unfinished and incorrectly proportioned for the angle it's at. Remedies could be: simple practice on copying something you want to emulate, real life or other art works and studying up on techniques like foreshortening and other angling stuff. That way it won't look flat, or even worse, like something I did. Basically, all you can do to fix problems is practice and look for what you don't like and correct it.
     
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    Not bad. Work on the face and skin detail. Good luck.
     
  4. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Alright. Thanks for the tip guys! ^^