This is just a really short one I wrote. I didn't really spen that much time on it so yeah...here it is. ~ All the Pain Seems to keep me sane as the rain starts to mame(sp?) As I take my final leap Into the endless deep ~ This massive feat Keeps coming back Just for the sake Of making me break As I drown into this endless lake
I like it, only suggestion is that either add another line to the first stanza, or remove one from the last so it lines up.
