Traditional Art Drawing of Yuna

Somewhat based on a FFX doujinshi cover I saw before while surfing the internet. I know the background could've been better, but I was lazy...and the legs are terrible, I know, I redid them like a zillion-times, and anymore than that would probably look even worse...but, aside from the legs, is there anything else I can try to improve upon?

 

you did very well! the only things i see out of place are yuna's eyes are two differet colors, it is a preety picture though, i don't think ican draw that well.

 

Yuna's eyes ARE different colors. >_>

The legs seem like she has HUGE thighs. You could've put a line from the bottom of the knees to ....yeah, I can't explain.
I think the line should be about there. *points at red line*

With the direction she's facing, there should be less hair on that side.

I'm just happy that you colored the pic at least. ^_^

 

Maybe work on the hand. The picture seems slightly bigger than it's supposed to be.

 

The eyes, hair, and hands could use some work, but the rest is pretty decent. By the way, do you have a DevianArt ? My link is in my sig. Anyway, great job and keep up the good work.

 

It's pretty! Though I agree her eyes are different colors....wish I had a scanner to put my doodles on the net too...

 

Well it's mostly the proportions that needs work here. Try to make it a little 'real'.
Here is some tips:
- You should try making her hair more 'floating' and make it fit her head form more. And maybe a little thinner eyebrows( just nagging from my side xD)
- Try defining her mouth more so it doesn't diappear with the face colour.
- The face shape could use some cleaning up and to me the eyes seem a little to far away from each other.
- Try defining her joints more, like her knees so she doesn't seem jelly like ;3
- Try making her breasts more 'bouncy' she's a grown up woman with breasts. But I like the shading on the left one.
- The arms are to skinny and the hands could use some work. Try makeing it look like one unit so one everything fits the other.
-Oh, and yes the legs as other people mentioned.
- It's very nice that you coloured it, it makes everything more lively at once. I like how you have tried to make clothing folds, a pretty good try :3.
Also how you tried fitting in all the small details (like the flowers) is very nice. It's a sweet drawing.

A big advice is just to keep drawing and practising, you can only get better :3

Keep it up ~

 

To those commenting on the eyes being different colors, that's because they are in X and X-2. One is green, the other blue. Not trying to be rude or anything, I'm just clarifying to those who might not know.

 

Thanks everyone for the comments, and the suggestions to improve it! And yes, I do have a dA account, "WorldofEmotion". I think I'll check yours out, Xigbar! :)

 

I would have to agree with EC about the legs, those stand out to me the most. The upper parts of her arms are too thin too, and there should be more hair on the left side.

You should try to define what she's sitting on to, because it's very flat. To me it looks like she's floating.

Keep practising and it'll be gorgeous ^^

 

Ehh, I don't like it very much. IT's too... scribbly. When you color, you need to have a certain pattern such as diagonal. Also, shading could be nice. She seems really flat.

 

^ Basically what Hissora said.

Also, why is Yuna's face so...so...sharp? Also as K a i r i, she's a grown adult woman at her finest. I think her breasts (what? Can't a guy say breasts? Geez.) would be as K a i r i also said, 'bouncy'. Not...ya know...sagging.

>.>

Anyway. Keep practising.

 

It's really good. but a few things cought my eye. First was the head, you gave her a long face. =/ And the left arm is really skinny. And then there's the legs, the thighs are really big. But overall, you did a awesome job. I really like it. And here are thing things you messed up at.. >.>

 

Haha, yes, I know, I've messed up a lot of it, but I'm trying....thank you everyone for your advice and critique, and I will continue practicing to try and improve!!

 

Yesh! Hehe, you'll do really good! I can't wait for the next drawing! <333