yeeaaaah, today in World Geo we got to watch a movie sort of thingy and Instead I drew another sort of anime person. I've been told at school that it looks similar to Inuyasha, but its NOT.. I just randomly think of someone and draw them =/ lol CnC please, and yes the head is SUPPOSED to be a little tilted (took forever to drew it like that lol)
Tilted heads can be tricky, so it would help to find a picture of a head and rotate it slightly to draw from that instead of trying it freehand. The points on the sides of the face should be even on both sides, since the left looks more rounded than the right. The left side could also be moved down a bit. The ears should also line up in a way, moving the left ear up a bit will fix that. The hair laying on top of her face could have the segments drawn in like you did with the bottom parts of the hair, so extend the lines upward. The neck is ok, but it should get wider as you move closer to the head. Just bringing the sides out slightly near where they meet the head would help with that. The shoulders aren't even, and the right is smaller than the left. They're also a bit too small for the size of the head, making them larger and also being careful to make sure they're evenly shaped and sized will help. The chest area looks too flat on the sides for a girl's body, try adding in some curves for a more human-like look there. The eyes are a good start, but making the outer lines and shape of the eyes less square shaped and more of an oval shape would fix that. Also, since the drawing looks very flat, add some shading to give a more 3D feel to it. Keep practicing on making both sides of your drawings evenly shaped and such, and they'll improve alot.
I like your 2- manga style a lot; especially the eyes are goodly drawn and the hair is quite cute and wavy. the ears are well drawn but the pointy teeth need to be a little more distinguished and you need to work on feminine chest curves to make them look like women's boobs and not lines because tbh I think they look like saggy lines on a jumper until you told me otherwise.
