Draw Pictures

Discussion in 'The Spam Zone' started by roxasloverdarius, Dec 5, 2007.

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  1. roxasloverdarius Destiny Islands Resident

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    Well I've got to say, I'm pretty da*n proud of this picture :), I drew it some time back in September, and I have to admit, for me, a girl who has NO way to color it on the computer (other than paint but it just sucks), I did pretty well with my coloring job.


    http://roxasloverdarius.deviantart.com/art/Kairi-Is-Sorry-66178235


    So what do you think? Do you think I did okay? :sweatdrop:

    Please tell me!!
     
  2. venster You never heard of me, but I pop in time to time

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    Critique: The eyes are too high. bring it down just a bit. With the coloring, you should start to consider about shadowing. And Kairi doesn't where make up. o-o but I can't say that the make-up is bad cause that's what you wanted.

    just keep working at it. ^_^
     
  3. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    Why are you showing this in the spamzone rather than in the arts and graphics section? Chances are you'll get more comments and suggestions over there.

    Anywhoo, eastercat's right about pretty much everything. You should shape the face to be more profile like, meaning you will be able to see the shape of the nose, lips, chin and forhead from the side. It's tricky, but will also look much better.

    (PS - you should update your sig, it says it's the month of Demyx - December would be Larxene's)
     
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