Don't leave me! Please!

Discussion in 'Archives' started by #1 DinestyX, Dec 14, 2007.

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  1. #1 DinestyX Gummi Ship Junkie

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    The wounds you have are far to deep,
    All you do is sleep.
    I'll cry all day and night,
    From this horible fright.
    You will not eat,
    but keep your seat.
    Please don't die,
    We would cry.
    I love you so,
    please don't go.
     
  2. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    This is pretty good. I can tell from it that you're feeling some pretty strong emotions. Just make sure you check your spelling and stuff. Other than that, good job.
     
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