Don't cry Dinesty

Discussion in 'Archives' started by JedininjaZC, Dec 8, 2007.

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how is this poem?

Poll closed Dec 10, 2007.
  1. fantasic!!

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  2. keep working on it

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  3. you call that a poem?

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  1. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    He never showed up on your date
    Was he late?
    Is he with another girl?
    The thought of him betraying you makes me want to go up to him and hurl

    Why does he live to tell about it?
    Why are the candles of your hope not lit?
    Forget him he is not worth your time.
    His face is made of slime.

    His hands are blood red.
    From all the hopes he made dead
    His eyes are disguised as friends.
    But they will destroy you in the end.

    His lips will slur lies.
    Whoever kisses him will die.
    Please Dinesty, please don't cry.
     
  2. #1 DinestyX Gummi Ship Junkie

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    AWWWW! THANK YOU ZC!

    *hugs*
     
  3. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    *gets huggled*
    thats what best friends do.
    *smiles*
     
  4. #1 DinestyX Gummi Ship Junkie

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    you're the best friend ever!
     
  5. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    Its so cute!!
     
  6. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    *smiles* you are my bestest friend too
     
  7. #1 DinestyX Gummi Ship Junkie

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    my brother hunted him down and used the pelet gun on him so...yah...go bubby!
     
  8. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    And i am the girlfriend. And everyone wins!:woohoo:
     
  9. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    *kisses* hey! we all win!!!!!
     
  10. #1 DinestyX Gummi Ship Junkie

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    lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  11. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    ROFL she is so funny.
     
  12. #1 DinestyX Gummi Ship Junkie

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    true! very true!
     
  13. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    I heard that!
     
  14. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    and i love u for it!
    *kisses on the cheek*
     
  15. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    Thank you. And Dynasty, I dressed up in a freakin banana suit and sang to make you smile so you definantly know i care.
     
  16. Rosey Chaser

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    *Smacks you all*

    Stop spaming >.> Go to the spam zone >.>

    *Deletes the spam posts*
     
  17. Ansem59 Chaser

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    *look's up and alligator's fall on top of me*

    OMG HELP MEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    oh woops sorry um won't happen agian BTW that hurt........
     
  18. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    Soorrrryyyy!
     
  19. keybladeofdarkness4 Twilight Town Denizen

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    That was the bestest EVAH!
     
  20. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Very nice..although you accidentally misspelled 'thought', and "eyes" and "kisses" shouldn't have an apostrophe...anyhow, this is a great poem. It was beautiful and very touching...I'm glad to see Dinesty liked it and feels cheered up. :)​
     
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