Like you're breaking down? Like you've fallen and can't pick yourself back up? Like there's no more hope in the world? Nothing to help you through your misery? Do you ever feel like sitting down and crying harder than you've ever cried before? Sometimes problems happen, and sometimes they can stop you in your tracks. Even though you feel like there's nothing left, like you've lost every thing in your life, don't give up. Those are three words that'll help you through. Don't. Give. Up. Keep trying, searching, for what it is you need to help you through. Sure, life can be hard, and the problems you face may seem like mountains of trouble, but in reality, they're just speed bumps on the road to a happy life. So go on, drive that next mile on the road to joy. Leave all your fears behind you, and keep moving on. YAY! First poem I've written in MONTHS! lol... It's a bit of a different style, so it might seem kind of weird (I think I did it wrong...) CnC please? :3 EDIT: Please try to ignore the space between the first and second line... I don't know how to get rid of it... lol...
Wonderfully and beautifully written....I like the transition from despair to hope.....which is very true in life.....excellent poem Destiny....*hug*.....
Thanks, Last... :glomp: And yeah, I've seen that transition many times... In my siblings lives... In my friends lives... Even in my own life a couple of times... And I saw that when there are problems like that (and I don't mean something small like getting grounded for a week... I mean a HUGE problem like all of your friends are turning on you or something) many people tend to wanna just give up... And it kind of inspired me to write about NOT giving up... If that really makes any sense... XD
