Traditional Art Did this over the summer any good?

well to tell the truth i was really bored and I colored it in school and when I got it on the computer I saw that it is crooked and brighter than it really is but cnc please

 

That's what scanner does to the art, sadly - messes it up more than it is in real life.

This looks pretty good, especially the jacket's folds are convincing. Kudos for that! The hair looks pretty thin, not sure if this character has thin or thick hair or something inbetween.

If you like, you should adjust the left part of her face, mostly the line most at the top - let it go a little inwards and then out again to become the forehead.

*I'm not in a crit mood anymore, sorry... tired and hungry, I tried my best*

 

pretty good kudos kudos and more kudos lol

 

Thanks I did messed up and you are right um heh thanks again

thank you

 

It looks awesome! =D
Great job! <3
Hinata is cool! .. xD

 

Yay! Thabks :D

 

I like it. Your scanner messed it up though. There isn't really anything wrong with it.

 

thank you :D and yes my scaner is evil