Too many yellow things that don't show well together. Plus there's nothing else in the background or with the yellow brush pile to make it look good. Then there's a few lines going out into the transparent part which look off. And what is that animal-man thing? A furry porn character?
Well, the yellow was meant to bring out the atom in his palm, but I kinda filtered through the atom and made it glow. The transparentsy was meant to bring something a little more abstract for my tastes. I was just messing around and thought it looked pretty cool. The lines coming out were meant to do that, it's designed to do that. Oh, and about the stock: It's not a furry porn character, it's an artist's cover album. It's Lapfox Trax if you're really interested.