Depression

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Laplace, Dec 18, 2007.

  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    I just want to cry
    My heart is dry
    I can feel my tears
    Cascading thought my cheeks

    Nobody in this world wants me at his side
    I can only feel depression consuming my heart
    I just want to cry
    Why the life must hate me so much?

    You hate me, admit it
    You can hide your emotions for me
    You want to kill me
    And now, admit it

    I can´t smile
    Don´t ask me impossibles
    I can´t be happy
    Just cry and be unhappy

    Nobody cares for me
    Nobody will do in his life
    I will never smile again
    Is the truth

    I am a bug, a bother
    I am nothing than a problem
    I should deserve to be alone
    Alone and in the oblivion
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    Just in the mood for this, don´t worry, I am not depressed.
     
  2. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Wow...that was great Chaser. I've actually been feeling like this a lot lately.
    There was just one part I was confused at.

    I don't really know what you're saying there...maybe you're missing a word or something? Or it could just be me (which it probably is). Anyways, I liked it a lot Chaser. Good job. ^^
     
  3. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    LOL, little error :sweatdrop: I´ll already fixed, thanks :3.