Deep Dive

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  1. Hunted Hunter Twilight Town Denizen

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    This is in Roxas's POV, and I wrote a little paragraph to go with each of the little "random word things" that showed up on the screen during the "Another Side, Another Story - Deep Dive" special ending video. You know, like these:

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    Utter Silence
    I never thought silence would be so sweet, until my thoughts were so loud that if anything else was making sound, my eardrums may explode. I didn’t know what kind of world surrounded me, except that it was completely black. I couldn’t see anything, and all I could hear was my thoughts. Either that or I couldn’t hear anything over the noise in my mind. Some kind of serenity engulfed me, but I couldn’t place its source. There was strange warmth inside me, as if everything was okay amidst this darkness. Nothing could be okay, yet it was. Nothing could explain it.

    Something So Natural
    Existence, although so simple, is oddly complex. There are many ways to live. It is something so natural, yet so unnatural no one can place it in a category. Life has its own category. I live in nothingness. There are light, dark, and nothing. Beings of light accept the dark, and beings of dark accept the light. Nothing is shunned by both spectrums. I live in that oblivion that is labeled as nothing. I live, but I do not exist. I was never meant to exist. Complexity yet simplicity shroud the mystery of life that challenges us every day.

    The Memory Beyond
    My past is an enigma. My memories were swept away with each day I live. The more I experience, the less I remember. The new memories planted in my mind with every new friend I make, and every person who tries to remind me of my past, just reminds me of the memory beyond. There was something so important that I couldn’t forget, but now I can’t place it. This place I was put in is too perfect, much too harmonious. There was some kind of pain in my past, but I don’t remember. It killed my being, and I was put in this place, the only place I remember now. My home; that’s what I call it, but it can’t be true. There’s something more to me than just a teenage boy carrying on a normal life.

    Something So Simple
    The thing I was searching for was too easy to forget. Other things keep pushing it to the back of my mind where I can’t reach it anymore. It was so simple, and so obvious. I don’t know what happened, but I don’t belong here. These people I’m with aren’t my real friends. I’m not sure who I’m looking for, but I’ll find them eventually. I remember a promise, too, but I don’t remember what I promised. It must have been important. It’s all I can think about lately. I guess I can count my promise broken. A promise not remembered might as well be a promise not kept.

    He Looks Just Like You
    Who is that boy? Everyone keeps telling me that he looks like me, but I don’t know who it even is. Maybe it’s the person I’m looking for. There’s no telling anything for sure anymore. My mind is so clouded that I don’t know why I even bother thinking. I never remember anything, except all the things that they want me to remember. Who looks just like me? They never say a name, or why he is important, but I hear often that he is like me in so many ways. He’s looking for his friends. Maybe he’s looking for the same person I am. I don’t know, and I have a feeling I never will.

    Everything Is Coming Back To Me, The True...
    My true friends, I remember them now. That boy is me. They’re looking at the other part of me, the part that doomed me to exist in nothing. When he saved her life, he never thought that he may just cause more trouble. He was always thinking of his friends. The one I’m looking for is that girl, the one he saved. She was robbed of her heart, and there’s another one like me out there. There is another nothing being, a Nobody. I was looking for her. I promised her that I would see her again. She told me we might not recognize each other, but I know her. I could never forget now. So many memories that I need to store deep in my mind, so I can never lose them again. No one can take away my past.
     
  2. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    Wow, beautifully written. It reads so deep and thoughtful. You have a great way in interpreting the random lines.