This life is my new dream our future is bright Your heart has its own gleam this path is cleared by our light Utopia's door is open Now we step forward to realize this wish A world without sin a place where dreams swish This place is a newer of heaven a new adventure This world has no twin C, you are my greatest treasure With you, my life is sasnctuary I love you C With you in this world it is truly a wonderful place your eyes glistening like pearls making me dazed repeatedly But no amount of beauty in another no amount of light in another Will make me stop loving you because our love was true When i was saddened on thisd earth you helped me through You caused my soul's rebirth then i realized i love you If anyone does you wrong pain relief is what they'll long Your amazing beauty your wonderful mind C, i love you truly my heart is for you to bind C, your beauty shining your eyes shine like the ocean under the starry sky Your face is like a beautiful painting and your hair dances with the wind Your words are a smooth melody soothing my sorrow and anger This world flies by peacefully you're my true love for sure C, you are my life and i'll help you through any strife My love, a bird in the sky making my heart soar To watch her go by makes my heart roar Your voice, like heaven's bell pulling me closer to paradise and bringing my feelings out of its shell that sound, ever so nice This person was my girlfriend but she unfortunately died from Leukemia
Judgement day poem. The darkness shrouding your dreams the shadows shrouding your brightest light the moon's rays show a red gleam darkness climax night spirits filling the sky the water turning scarlett watch as demons go by te gothic dream lit This belthazor's realm fire is shooting through the earth every burning elm watch as this is evil's birth so listen to what i say this is judgement day.
Twilight Town poem My memories of this relaxing town so happy and warm the sun reflecting against your face your beautiful eyes glistening in the light Everyone here So lively and free Anyday theres a strife they're just laughing bout it later Those who truly forgive they are the ones who forget their troubles For those who do not they're the ones who dont forget
(Just letting you know, I think there's a rule against this. You're supposed to keep all of your poetry in one thread, me thinks.)
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=75548 Maybe you should let them know too. By the way, I like the poem. :3
like i care bout that basta@@. heres another. the quotes go with the poem btw Quotes: Time heals all things-Crazy eyes Every heart begins and also ends in darkness-Xehanort my favorite quote Why should i pray for your god when hes trying to take her from me-Sam Neill Who in 19 centuries has prayed for Satan. Who has prayed for the one sinner who needed it the most?-Mark Twain Poem-Emotion These are quotes that run my life its fate's job to torture me And stab my heart with a knife God says it will set my soul free Its been a month since her death time hasnt healed my heart Maybe its time to draw my last breath and let satan take his part I had always lived in the shadows until she came My moments with her were heaven god came and destroyed that Now my soul is dark as hell Maybe i'll pray for that one sinner maybe his darkness can bring her back All it costs is my soul that thing i never had God has been slowly killing me over time Satan's darkness.....maybe.
That wasn't nice =( This is very powerful. To tell the truth, the other one was better since this has way too much depression in it. Brighten up a bit will you?
I agree, this is epic. Great job. The way it ended was PERFECT, it built up to it until finally, "This is judgement day." Quite an impact. Also, is that Tsukasa from .hack//SIGN in your avatar? xD That's epic as well.
Nice dark feeling, consistent theme. The only thing I would say is that the rhyming scheme and rhythm of it seem a bit generic, but that's probably just me. Keep it up.
I now this a necrobump but I'm trying to stick to the keep your poetry in one thread rule Raindrops of Golden Sorrow Today, this night me and my love wed an old love begins a new life an angel I see before my eyes a beast I see in myself As we dance our hearts bind forming an everlasting link as time goes by that beast is calming down and is changing into something new A prince with a hearet of gold while she remains a coveted angel How I long or her kiss my heart beating faster As our lips draw closer my mind begins to rush I see our future together but it remains in only death our lips touch and tears run down my cheeks then it rains making the scene a memorable memory Now I will cherish our love and memory as that is all I will have in the end
aw thats so sweet...I love the poem...I'm sure your girlfriends spirit is happy...So long as shes not forgotten and you can still be happy.
Untitled my conscious mind....falling my mind soon to be shattered Life is mirror which reflects your true self All I am is just a monster My spirit long gone my love too far away to grasp why is that I'm like this? this pain..unbearable A broken heart is what I received but she was always apart of me my true love but she's faded away into the depths of my memory Beyond thought, There is a forgotten promise to keep She is my life and I will help her through any strife but all that means nothing now She's dead and those closest to me are now distant Why is it that your god took her from me? She was an angel by sight and mind She was perfect to my eyes Yet you took her away from me pain is inevitable but suffering is optional I chose to suffer now my life shall end I went to kitchen to fetch wood by the dock I stood I jumped off the dock tied to the wood by a lock I must die so I can see her again my beloved Ciara if only death kept it's promises... Acception Here what I call home my friends, family, and love then I left that world i realized the pain, sorrow and hardship of life darkness was how I made it through darkness aided me in times I needed it most i feared the light then Feared the judgement I would receive I just didn't know how to get through Until I met her She was a light i could not fear She is alight that I treasure and care what I began to feel was love i finslly accepted the light and turned my back on darkness but it will always be there my darkness, burden, and darkside will it ever disappear? Untitled Darkness has shrouded the light I have it's been 6 months since she died her love was a haven for my soul the only light I have are my memories of her I loved her greatly she was my life and she helped me through alot of things with her there was no strife To lose one's love can destroy someone love and memories are what make us whole what i call a heart was something I lost long ago I had casted away my feelings to darkness Hearts are born and end in darkness yours is no different yet you understand so little bengs of light are not her to save you the light you call god is a myth you see when you cast your soul to darkness there'sa supposed light to save it from what I saw there was a weakling He was swallowed by darkness and he remains silent he toys with our lives causing many strives He took her from me yet you still love him dearly If only you knew what I felt this darkness raditaing from my shattered heart He rendered me emotionless a shell of what I once was a being of pain, sorrow and anger darkness helped him live grief does cause us pain as always but it destroys us in the end
Attempted Rap poem Bingzap bingzap bingzap that's what i hear when i play this old country is startin to waste away fate's old game ends with a SLAP tap tap tap that's right old chap you've raised this world now it's goin this way take my hand and listen to what I say This world is startin' to waste away Recollection Memories are a scene long to be forgotten. I remember lying on the wet grass... with her, Just staring at the twinkling stars under the moonlit night sky. We’d sit by a tree watching the sun set crimson, Such a wonderful feeling, A feeling of love and ecstasy like none other, If only I could go back to that life, My beating heart now dying of grief. Now, now I lay by the lake, Just listening to the waves under the starry sky, The sound so beautiful and charming, If only the waves would bring her back to me. Every morning, I stare in the luminous sky, Feeling the heat of the sun warm my face, As her rosy lips did mine, if only, Time may have gone by but that only afflicted more of my pain. If only, if only I could vanish from this world as did she Then I could be forgotten None who would love me, Nor those who would mourn for me Eternal night’s hand reaches for my heart Ready to grasp and shroud my feelings forever My dying heart howls to the moon My mind pleading to be put out of its misery Now only the silence of the cold night calms me down The coldness of the night in which my soul finally died
Loving Pain Loving Pain This pain is unbearable my heart is trembling and my mind is getting weaker I chase after those memories once forgotten Begging for them to come back to me but they all look at me with hate What have I done to deserve this pain what have I done to deserve this fate Should I just let my life go to waste? should I just end my life right now? this pain is killing me slowly if only I wasn't a coward A coward does not live through life but a coward is afraid to let his life end Which should I do KHV, hang by a block of wood Or stare at her grave, there my soul stood Waiting for God to bring her back to me if only if only
