Decietful lies.

From a rumour.
It spreads like fire.
The fire inside burns
pain unleashed.
There seems there is no way out.
Yet dont give up.
there is a way up.
My hand is there to pull you out.
These deceitful lies will vanish.
For there is the true power of love.


Wow it's been 30 mins and noo one replied... That's a bummer.

 

Don't be sad, it not like for a 15 year old boy to check out the creativity corner every 10 min or sumthin.

Anyway, I understand your poem. Its happened to me A LOT.
Then I decide to just ignore them and never check if theres new ones floating around.

And btw theres a typo in deceitful. X3

 

Aw\crud. It happens to me a lot. I was beat up in a riot bvecause of a rumour around me once. But you just have to let it wash away.

 

This is a good poem, keep it up okay

 

That's a really good poem. Keep writing. :)

 

Ok I'll try. I normally dont write in this style so their a bit shabby.

 

Ah... another great one that speaks the truth!

:)