What's it like to die? Is it hot ? Or is it cold? Do you even realize you're dead? Do you just die and that be that? Or do you come back and share the misery of loved ones? If there is a god why does he let people die? Would the coffin be comfy is you became the living dead? Do you think you'd be more likable t0 everyone if you died?
just a few errors hun, but it was still a great job i love the idea and i love the words you put together for it =]
thanks and i already know what you mean by errors i think is it the fact i didn't use punctuation?cause if it is i have a perfectly good reason i haven't been taught the appropriate times to use punctuation at school yet
She meant the spelling. I thought it was kinda weird when I looked at the thread name at it had a smiley face then Death :\ But aside the spelling errors, it was alright.
yeah the smiley face always appears with my postsi don't know why though it's kinda strange and the spelling i'm normally awesom at spelling but since i'm onl 13 years old i can't spell everything