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  1. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    It's a sad thing to happen.
    To someone so close.
    It makes you feel empty.
    And umcomplete.
    Like you have no other feeling.

    You feel like you got your heart ripped out.
    Your in nothing but pain.
    Why is that?
    Why are you in so much pain?
    Do you know the answer?

    The answer is love.
    You were so close to them.
    You've been with them most your life.
    Your birth to their death.
    You don't crack down.

    Until you place that flower on the casket.
    That's when the tears show.
    That's when you lose all strength.
    That's when you lose the will to hold back.
    That's when your heart gets broken.

    You have someone to comfort you though.
    Another person close to you.
    They will be your gaurdin angel.
    They'll give the other person wings.
    They will fly out of their casket.

    As you watch the tears stop.
    You feel the emptiness go away.
    You feel happy.
    Knowing that the loved one is happy.
    No more pain for them.

    There's happiness now.
    You can always pray to talk to them.
    You can always remember them.
    Remember the happy times.
    A year later.

    You'll still remember.
    You'll always remember that day.
    The certain day.
    And the saddest day.
    When death took over.

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    Ok the only reason I wrote that is because I had a lot of stress and both my grandfather and grandma died I had to let my feelings out some how.
     
  2. Arcantress King's Apprentice

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    Oh my goodness Sadden...


    that made me cry.

    Honest to god it did.

    Great poem.
     
  3. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    :D glad u enjoyed it
     
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    My grandpa died in 2004 of cancer....cried....that was very good sadden
     
  5. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    :D thank you
     
  6. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    My grandmother died in 2005 due to ovarian cancer...

    Her death and this poem made me cry so much...
     
  7. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    it made me cry just thinking of the deaths
     
  8. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    *hugs*

    It's okay; just know that they're in a better place.
     
  9. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    i know.......
     
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    Thank you too for depressing me more, now I fell better, but I didn´t suffered too much, since my grandmother and my grandfather died when I was younger.
     
  12. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    wow chaser thanx of the comment that made me feel wayyyyyyy better -.-
     
  13. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Hey, SBW.

    I hope you feel better.

    *hugs*
     
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