Death Note Fan Fiction

This is Death Note II, as written by myself.

A priest was on his way to the supermarket to purchase a pot roast that he was going to cook that night, a couple of his good friends were going to watch the Detroit Tigers play the Cleveland Indians that night and he needed to get the proper edibles.

On his way to the supermarket, he saw a bluebird. He stared at it and wondered about the innocence of life until the bird fluttered away...

After spending several seconds lingering by where the bluebird had stood just seconds before, he continued on to the supermarket.

At the supermarket, he had his pot roast, along with several large bags of assorted chips. He pulled up to the cashier. The nametag on the young boy's shirt read "LIGHT". The boy was tall and had long brown hair.

"Hello," Said Light.
"Good day." Said the Priest.
"Did you find everything alright?" Said Light.
"Yes, thank you." Said the Priest.
Light put all the items in a plastic bag and collected the priest's money.
"Will that be all?" Asked Light.
"Yes," Replied the priest.
"Thank you for shopping at Busch's Supermarket," Said Light.
The priest smiled and headed toward the automatic doors...
But he was dead before he took two steps.

Light cackled manianically until he died as well.

They both died of heart attacks.

The Bluebird had written their names in the Death Note exactly 40 seconds after their eyes first met.

~Fin~

 

Lol, that was a very nice story.

 

Best fan fic of Deathnote I've read! :)

 

It all tied togethor so well. There's subtle hints litered throughout the story that really support the rising action, and like pieces in a puzzle they all fit togethor to create an amazing climax that I doubt anyone saw coming. You deserve a fricken medal.