Deadly secret

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  1. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    Eh lyrics to a song I wrote, I think it sucks but it's up to you guys any comments?


    <Verse 1>
    Watching in the shadows
    Watching the destruction
    I lay to mind
    The secrets that await
    So what now
    No life after death
    No light to set you free
    Soon you'll see
    Thst life is social
    One person to another
    And another
    And another
    Being the social outcast
    We being the enemies
    No one to say
    Goodbye
    No one to say
    I love you
    But no one cares
    So come on
    Follow me
    As we set sail
    In this sea of blood
    No stopping death now

    <Chorus>
    Do you want to know
    The deadly secret
    Do you want to see?
    What you have been
    Missing
    No one to yell or cry
    We're gonna let it die
    THIS IS THE...
    DEADLY SECRET!

    <Verse 2>
    I know you don't like me
    But you know me
    The crazy basterd
    That no one likes
    The crazy basterd
    Everyone hates
    Everyone feeds on
    The remains of his mind
    Just a sacrafice
    Domination is the game
    If you don't like me
    Then kill me
    **** you!


    So it sucked right?
     
  2. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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  3. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    Any other comments?
     
  4. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    well

    to tell you the thruth this is not my kind of song

    but actually, its nice to see the lyrics, wich are well made

    actually this would make a good song

    it seems like this song carries a strong emotion, i think its good
     
  5. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    I kind of thought it would suck.. but I guess I was wrong....