Darkness

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Lily Lilac, Jan 12, 2009.

  1. Lily Lilac Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Darkness

    I live in the dark and struggle to embrase the light,
    I know it's futle,
    But i have to try,
    I know i'll never sucede,
    But i have to believe in me.




    Sorry it's short it was just a little something in my head i had to get out.
     
    Lily Lilac, Jan 12, 2009
    Lily Lilac, Jan 12, 2009
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  2. Spunk Ransom you're already perfect

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    It's pretty good. Short but good.
    Just try to watch out for spelling mistakes.
     
    Spunk Ransom, Jan 12, 2009
    Spunk Ransom, Jan 12, 2009
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  3. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    I think this should be in the Original Work section.
    Oh, and watch out for spelling errors :)
    But it sounds good! Very serious :P
     
    Bond of Flame, Jan 17, 2009
    Bond of Flame, Jan 17, 2009
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