Darkest Blade's Poems

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  1. Cutsman Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Hellow All!, I have made a few poems, so instead of having a bunch of poems spread out through the forums, I will have this small little, i dunno, "File" of my poems that I have written. I am a newer one of the poets with barely any experience with writing, but hey! I like writing my poems, so here is the one that I Actually submitted into the January Poem Contest, so I'll see how it turns out, this one is called "Hidden Love", and I hope you all like it! And if you have never read my poems they normally revolve around the life of teenagers around the world, so that the readers, (if teens) can relate easily, or if they are older!! Either way I hope you like 'em! Here it goes:

    "Hidden Love"

    I want to tell you my feelings,
    I guess I'm just too scared
    Afraid of what you'll think
    And say when I'm not there.

    My love for you must stay hidden,
    Behind the barred cage of my heart
    Our friendship is just too important
    My feelings can't be smart

    The destruction of my love,
    My heart is a battlefield
    To tell, or not to tell
    My feelings have got to yeild

    Since we were born,
    For, all these long years
    I know what you could say to me
    My eyes would swell with tears

    I want to tell you how I feel
    But what if you dont feel the same?
    This deciscion bouncing back and forth
    Its just like some child's game

    My hidden love is killing me
    Its like a gun is ravaging inside my heart
    I start to gag, a feeling I can't shake
    Then the pain begins to start

    So I just let go, of all I feel
    In my heart grows a kink
    I want you to like me
    But i'm just too afraid of what you think.....






    Ok this is my first entry into my small little "File" of my poems.... tell me what uou us think and I might keep adding on to this file! L8er~ =P