Darker: a Kingdom hearts spinoff story

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  1. Noise For Love and Justice

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    My fanfic..story...thing... lol any way i hope i like it, it my frist one go easy on me and COMMENT LOADS!^_^
    ok im going to say this now my spelling sucks i type to fast for my eyes to read and i dont like to put in all the things to make it proper ENGLISH so if there are a few errors please over look them if its spelling please tell me how to sleep the word right ^_^

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    The Heart-------A beautiful thing-----An ugly thing-----Every Friend you have----makes your hearts grow stronger---Every EMEMY you have makes your heart grow

    D-A-R-K-E-R

    Chapter I: Discovering Destiney

    a young man of about 16 was walking down the dirty old street that he had walked since he was a kid, the sidewalk was covered with paint and cracks...his town was poor..
    His name was Ryan and to Ryan his life was borind old and tirersome he wished that he could leave this town find a new place to start over, but he had no money and thus he couldnt leave.
    He felt trapped in this empty rat hole of a town, but yet he his dreams told him otherwise.
    In his dreams he fought huge monsters saved towns and protected people in his heart that mad him feel good. and he liked his dreams
    As he walked down an old alley way that was empty except for the trash bins and stray cats, he walked down about half way untill he heard a voice.
    The voice mad him jump and he wheeled arond to see a man... or he though was a man because the voice was deeper than a women... the man was wearing a black treanch coat and his face was hidden under his hood.
    "haha" laughed the man in a tone that made Ryans hair stand on end "i was beinging to loose hope that i would find you", them man reached up and pulled back his hood to relvel a face that was not much older than Ryans, strong jaw frim cheeks and his eyes piecerd Ryan with terrible power the man's hair was in a mo-hawk and was all blue...a deep sea blue so deep Ryan began to doubt if it was blue at all.
    Ryan was scared he didnt know what to do let alone what the man wanted,
    he reached for his empty wallet and pulled it out maybe if give it to him and run he wouldnt get me Ryan thought, his legs shaking with fear.
    "I got him" the man said to himself, or atleast Ryan thought was himself.
    It was jus them in the alley no one else but i few cats.
    Then with our warning Ryan could feel somthing crawling up his leg, he looked down and saw black stuff swerling out of a hole of blackness that had not been there before, it creeped slowly up untill it reached Ryans chest...but its wasnt going up, it was ryan who was sinking into the black stuff.
    He tryed to scream but he couldnt the black stuff was over his mouth now. it was swallowing him taking him into it...the man in the black coat just stood there and

    L-A-U-G-H-E-D


    end of Chapter I