Yeah. I tried making it with aftereffects to give it a little ZZAH! But, its a little slow loading. What do you think? EDIT: Without Smoke Version
It looks oversharpen, or overpixelated, either way change that for one, and I do like the gif thing I think it turned out nice. I would say make the render smaller, it is taking up way to much space in the tag, and add some foreground effects right under the render and leading up his back.