the thoughts of a loveless, pointless nobody go here.. I. i want love in a paper cup tip it over, drink it up always easier said than done i'm still a flower.. @-,-'-- without a sun </3
I d'awed so much. That little piece was cute! I liked it. Just watch your grammar and be careful not to use smiley faces, it ruins the effect, imo at least. Nice, I guess~
I loves chu, Mar Mar! *huggles* And I like your smilies too. Don't be sad~ And hurry up and come home so you can be back on forums.
Cute. It was short sweet and to a point, I like it *thumbs up* I think it would be nice to read some more of your work ^_^
Awww, that was really cute. ;~; I liked the metaphor of the first line, and just overall d'awww. ;___; Like Koruso said, just try to watch grammar a bit (as well as the smiley faces). Otherwise, hope you post more soon!
This is really adorable and so so kawaii <33333 I agree, I am totally in love with the first line. I feel like I can see this on those super adorable korean notebooks and pencil cases with the little poetry in the bottom and stuff. That's just ever so lovely. I love them, I have a couple xD But yeah, I see something like this on here. You should share moar ~~~ <3