okay this is a storyline for manga im going to start doing sometime and i want some feedback be kind flamers will be put out by blasteroids Tokyo As the sun shone down Natalie (okay honesty time I haven’t thought of a last name I really like any ideas guys?) ran down the street she was going to be late for school again if she didn’t hurry. “Stupid alarm clock†she muttered. As she rounded a corner and she ran into someone falling down. ‘Ow’ she thought “Are you okay?†said a voice. She opened her eyes to see a boy about her age looking down at her hand extended towards her. He had midnight black hair that she couldn’t tell if it was naturally like that or if he styled it that way, he had blue eyes, and wore a black school uniform with I unbuttoned revealing a red t-shirt underneath it, but that’s not what drew her eyes. It was his aura. For a long as she could remember she had been able to see people’s aura with them ranging from blue as the most common to black for total jerks, but his aura was unique from any she had ever seen before a strange color. It was crimson red. She took his hand smiling. “Thank you.†She said. “No problem I’m Takashi†he said “I’m Natalie.†She said looking at her watch. “Oh NO I’m going to be late†she cried running off. Takashi watched her running off he eyes narrowing turning a deep crimson, before running after her towards the school. Jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeecccccccccccccccchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhtttttttttttt Natalie ran into the room just as the bell rang. “I GASP made GASP it†she wheezed out. “Nice for you to join us miss (I still need a last name help please!!) please take your seat.†Said the teacher. She sat down sheepishly. “Now then students I’d like to introduce you to a new transfer student from America.†Said the teacher. Murmurs suddenly ripped through the classroom a new student halfway through the year? The door slid open and Takashi walked in. “Hey I’m Takashi Wyvern, I’m 17, and I hope I get to know you†he said with a grin “okay takeshi please take your seat by the window next to miss (seriously guys need a last name for Natalie any ideas?)†said the teacher. Takeshi walked over and sat down smiling at Natalie. “Hey there so were in the same class together cool huh†he said chuckling. She blushed slightly “um yeah I guess so†she said She then noticed all the other girls in the room staring daggers at her, and she didn’t have to read their aura to know what they were thinking. She was going to get it later. Nnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttaaaaaaalllllllllliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Natalie sat down at her lunch table opening her lunch box when there was a great movement around her, she sweat-dropped as she saw a lot of girls from her class sitting around her glaring at her. “how do you know Takeshi-kun?†“are you two dating?†“how long have you known him?†“why didn’t you tell us?†She sweat dropped again at the onslaught of questions. “I just met him this morning on the way to school!†she said flustered All the girls started squalling as they discussed plans to get to know takeshi. She then looked around looking for takeshi and realized he wasn’t in the cafeteria, so she packed up her lunch back up and walked away from the continuingly squalling girls and walked up to the roof. She had just closed the door when she heard a voice say “hey there†She jumped dropping her box lunch, she then turned to her right and saw takeshi sitting there eating a cheeseburger with his left hand and holding her lunch in the right. “oh thank you†she said as he handed her the lunch. He then patted the ground next to him and she took a seat there. “so um why did you move to Tokyo?†she asked a little shyly He shrugged “it’s complicated†he said as he pulled out another burger. She looked away munching on some melon bread, his aura had flared slightly. They ate their lunches in silence until the bell rang and she stood up and turned to leave when she noticed he hadn’t moved. “aren’t you coming?†she asked He nodded “yea just something I have to do first†he said. She nodded and headed down to the class room. Takashi watched as she left then moved out of sight for a second, a moment later there was a slight flash of red light. Natalie looked around as the second bell rang and noticed takashi wasn’t back yet. ‘weird’ she thought. She heard the door open and saw takashi walk in. Her eyes widened as she noticed his aura was significantly weaker than before. As he took his seat she decided that he was worth walking on home with. please give some good comments if you like it just tell me and ill put more chapters on later oh and to the gang dont expect me on a ton kay
