Traditional Art D.e.a.l.

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Scarred Nobody, Jan 15, 2009.

  1. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    Okay,i've been stuck at home all day and had nothing else to do. I did not do this free-hand, i did the stick figure circle body thing (i don't know what it is called). Doing it, it took me about an hour to an hour-in-a-half to complete it.

    I know the background could have a little more detail and the boy's backpack did look merpy (merp is a word my friend made up that ment crappy or something like that). PLEASE DO NOT repeat what i just pointed out or what other people point out in their critisisms. And don't just say that this is really good or really crappy either, state your reasoning!

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  2. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    I like how you drew the leaves/sakura petals there. Beautiful <3

    though, I can see a problem with the guy's face. It looks rather flat and out of proportion/wrong if he was looking that way. His head also looks too small for his body.
    The girl's very well done. Though, her skirt doesn't look so flowy, if it's being blown by the wind make sure ya do the right clothing folds :3
    Lastly, the tree's leaves shouldn't look so stiff. Tree's can come very differently, they don't have to be a big cloud like shape all the time.

    That's all :3 Nothing a little practice can fix =D
    Still such a sweet and nice work of art Tummer~
     
  3. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    Yeah, my male and my tree do look kinda funny.