Crush on a vampire

Sorry if I posted this in the wrong section, I was debating weather to post it here, or the fantasy rpg area but I ended up thinking here would be better oh and please don't be too hard on me this is the first rp i've made anyway onto the subject of this rp.



~story~
It starts when a girl named Elena Green goes to school one morning at school she is like royalty, Elena is the girl every boy wants and every girl wants to be. But on the way to school one morning on the first day of term she spotted a gigantic crow in a tree and it was staring at her, its eyes seemed almost human and it was staring at her like the boys stare at herwhen shes wearing a swimming costume she threw a rock at it and flew away to the woods and landed in a tree, Stefan Salvatore saw this crow land he felt it from his powers he had just finished draining the blood from a rabbit and drove off in a porche to school Elena saw him get out of the car and immediately she felt in love she was with her two best friends, Bonnie Mucollugh and Meredith Lolly and immediately they knew what was going on. Later Elena discovered that Stefan was in her fin al class and although she tried to get him to notice her he ignored her something no boy had ever done before there is something in Stefans past he won't let anybody find out he never eats lunch nobody would ever guess he's a vampire and the crow is really something nobody would ever guess part of Stefan's past it was really an advanced vampire named Damon Salvatore Stefan's brother and he has his eyes on sucking Elena's blood




OC Form


Played by:
Name:
Age(16 or under if you go to the school please but don't be dumb and say 3 years old please):
Gender:
Vampire or not:
Appearence(optional but preffered):
Dies or Survives=Gets bitten by a vampire and killed or not:



Characters:
Stefan:The Fifth Element
Elena:CtR
Damon:CtR
Bonnie:
Meredith:





EDIT:
Teachers and police and other people are NPC's so as long as it doesn't highly effect other peoples use of role play more than one person may use an NPC



Rules
1.No power playing
2.No godmodding
3.No killing without the other persons say so
4. Have fun :)

 

Stefan commodo(Stefan please)

and is this loosely based on Twilight

 

okie dokie your in and this actually based on a book named "The Vampire Diaries The awakening" there should be one or two more books in the series but i've only read one anyways do you want to start or shall I?

 

uh well I'm still thinking of one so can you?

 

ooc-Ok


The crow that was Damon stared down upon Stefan from a tree outside the school foolish brother when will you learn you have been blessed not poisoned being a vampire means you can do all sorts of nifty tricks so what if a few mortals die, it's their fault for carrying the strongest known blood isn't it? And that pretty girl thats been trying to meet you she looks so like her i'll have to meet her some time her blood seems so pure Damon thought hungrily



Elena averted her gaze from Stefan, she felt as though she was being watched she looked outside and saw that same crow looking at her in the same way it made her feal uneasy, as if a boy was spying on her trying to get a good look at her she tried tto ignore the crow and buried her face in a book but it was is if the crows gaze couldn't be blocked

 

Ever so subtly, Stefan moved to sit in front of the window, blocking his brother's view. He shifted a small bit and stared out at his brother.What is he planning this time.Good heavens

 

Elena's attention was drawn from the window as the bell rang, finally it was the end of school she waited till the rest of the class had left she stood inthe middle of the aisle stefan was on blcking his way "Hi, i'm Elena green, i'm on the new student commitee I have been asked to show you around"Elena lied


Damon stared at his brother he had seen him, it is a good thing I accept being a vampire. At least I can travel long distances in a second, yet i'll still follow this girl maybe the darkness is more to her taste Damon thought then gave out a quiet yet cold laugh so quiet nobody would hear

ooc-Don't forget the plot line Stefan tries to avoid everyone else plus his brother being there

 

((okay but I don't want to make him rude...unless he is))

He bowed formally. "I regret to say I must decline," he said. Turning, he picked up his bag and threw it over his shoulder. He made his way to the door, heading home. He planned on making a stop at his locker first though.

 

ooc-no hes not hes actually bent on good manners and sorry i havent posted i kinda forgot about this rp but it wont happen again i promise


Elena stared unsure what to do then an idea came to mind i'll follow him to his house and make a plan from there Elena thought and stealthaly tailed Stefan without realizing he would be able to feel her presence


Damon smiled he knew he could read minds and he had heard Elenas thoughts Damon already had a plan in his head he'd turn into a rabbit and tail Elena then he'd make his brother feel dizzy and make him pass out then he would simply take Elenas but at the same time turn her into a vampire shunned from everybody and once Damon started to feed on humans here Elena would get the full blame it was a perfect plan

 

You have alot of spelling mistakes. You have absoloutely no periods and I got mixed up entirely.

 

Ooh...Can I play?
Played by:~Sasumi~
Name: Zoe
Age: 15
Gender: female
Vampire or not: sure
Appearence: pale, black leggings under a black denim mini-skirt, white tank top, curly brown hair.
Dies or Survives: survivor

 

okie dokie your in and Soranspartanti shut up i've made no spelling mistakes its a fact of different countries spell things differently

 

Oh. (shocked)
What ye say? You mean your in a different country? Uh...you still keep on saying and then and and and then then.....now please don't say shut up to me.

 

ooc-sorry i didn't mean it like that i meant dont just jump to conclusions like americans have a different spelling of "colour"

 

Well, anyway, I'll think I'll join.
Name: Jak
played by: Soranspartanti
gender: boy
vampire?: Nope
appearance: black pants, running shoes, white button shirt, tie, light brown hair.
dies?survives?bitten by a vampire?: Yes dies. Permission from me if ya want to kill him.

 

*walks in door to school* This should be easy. I mean, how hard could it be to find a 3-inch ruby? And a girl. And a boy. Okay, maybe not so easy. Dang, I gotta stop talking to myself.

 

ooc-okily dokily your in

 

oc: Sweet! Thx!

 

ooc~thats ok you can start whenever you want



Elena stealthily followed Stefan he will be mine even if it kills me


Damon quickly turned into a rabbit then changed his plan cats follow people so he turned into a cat instead and tails elena