Crimson Fate~ chapter 1

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  1. Shuhbooty moon child

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    The rain hit her face like small kisses, the wind made her hair look like snake trying to slither away.

    “Hey dinner!” A voice shouted

    “Coming!” she replied as she grabbed her sword and walked back to camp

    “Where have you been? A man in a gray suit of armor said as he took a bite out of his biscuit

    “Outside I needed fresh air” She said as she grabbed a chair and sat beside the man.

    “It’s poring rain and your outside getting air?”

    “Yeah and?!” She sat there watching the men in the room eat there hot soup and biscuits.

    “Your just like your brother, you know that?” The man said as he put down his bowl

    “Dad duh you’ve told me a million times I know..god”

    My brother pasted away when I was 13. He was the top ranking soldier her in the Crimson fate. That’s the name of our clan. We were once followers of the king, But he soon past away some time ago. My brother then took over and helped our fallen clan and worked hard to help put back the way it was.
    My father love my brother so much, that’s when father took me and began to train me in the Crimson Knights. I worked hard just like my brother, but that night when he went out on a distress call he never came back.

    Days flew by and nobody knew where he was. Father got worried and I panicked. Father sent out men and a week went by. The came back, covered in blood…my brothers blood. I was devastated, I cried almost every night for him.

    “Hey Twi off to bed!” My dad said as I got out the chair

    “Ok I’m off to bed then” I said as I left the great hall


    - StarShine Kingdom-

    “Like that, there you go.”

    “Really? Like that?”

    “Your doing great Kylin.”

    “Hey brother?” Kylin said as he put down his training stick

    “Yes dear brother?”

    Kylin Fate is my name, I’m the servant here at the Star Shine Kingdom. My brother Toya Fate is the Kingdom guard here and the Star Shine kingdom. I work Hard here with my brother and he trains me so that I can become on of the Kingdom guards with him one day.” Hey you boy other there!Come over here now!” I ran over

    “Yes how may I help you?” SLAP “You do not address my that way Boy! WE CLEAR!! I knelled down before him and apologized.” That’s what I thought boy, now leave me.” Kylin got up and walk quietly towards Toya. ”Ok time for bed” Toya said as he grab Kylin’s arm and took him home.
    “Are you ok Kylin?” Toya ran to the bathroom and grabbed a few ointment and Came back out “ Yeah I’m fine he didn’t slap me hard this time.” Well he’s just a-grrr” Toya always got mad went someone touched .” Well please just go off to bed then..” Kylin grabbed a cup of water and went to his room.


    -Sky Kingdom-

    Twi was outside early as the clouds were once again clearing out the sun.” And yet another rainy day..” She signed heavily. ”It’ll be like this for awhile” A voice said “ Yeah I know Kima it’s raining season.” I replied as he stud next to me still wearing his pjs. “ Well what do you want?” I said as he looked down at me. “ Your dad wanted me to look for you. Just wondering where you are I guess” I stud up and looked at him. “ Thanks I’ll go see him then.” I tired my sword to my side and walk to my dads tent

    This is chapter 1 chapter 2 coming soon
    so what did you think? I worked hard on this chapter
     
  2. xiegin Destiny Islands Resident

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    good story keep up da good work
     
  3. Shuhbooty moon child

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    heh thanks fot the support