Okay, guys! Get ready for a fanfic made by a Twilight fan boy! Yes, I said fan boy! So, here it goes! Crescent Preface Before you continue reading this, let me first assure you that I'm not your average seventeen year old boy. If you want to stay ignorant of the phenomena that happens in my life, then put this away and read something else to pass the time by. This tale I will tell will change your view of reality. If you continue, I guess I'll tell you a little bit about myself... My name is Chap Simpson. My real name is Chapman, but I prefer Chap. I'm a junior that attends Forks High School in a little town out in the middle of nowhere in Washington. I have black hair with a little red here and there. My hobbies include video games, playing guitar and drums, skateboarding, and driving my '76 Ford Mustang in street competitions. My favorite hobby is, however, drawing. I mostly draw video game characters that I think are cool, like Shadow The Hedgehog and Cloud Strife. I listen to almost every genre of rock music, ranging from Nickelback to The Devil Wears Prada. My favorite type is either heavy metal or screamo. I'm never caught without wearing some kind of wristband. I usually wear a checkerboard pattern band. Well, that's about it concerning me. I do, however, have another major but scary characteristic... At my own will, I can transform into a monster. I fall onto my arms as they turn into front legs. A long tail unravels from my hindquarters. Black fur covers every visible inch of my body. My fingernails and toenails become sharp, retractable talons that rip through flesh like butter. All my senses increase drastically, giving me inhuman sight, smell, hearing, etc. I crave flesh every second while in my transformation. I mostly eat deer, but sometimes by complete accident I have human flesh. I'm what you call a werelion. Scary, huh? If you read any farther, you might doubt my story about werewolves, vampires, and my kind. All information contained in this is absolutely true. You can ask anyone in Forks, Washington, about the Simpson, Swan, Cullen, and Black families. They'll assure you of their mysteries and theories about them. I guess I'll stop rambling on and begin telling you about my time in Forks. It starts off at my first day of school, when I first saw her... Chapter 1: Angel I drove into the Forks High parking lot in my '76 Ford Mustang. I was new here and I didn't know much about the area. I knew a few friends in the La Push area, but that was it. I wasn't the best at making friends, but I had a good feeling about Forks, Washington. I was in a pretty good mood today. I usually didn't get good sleep at night, so I was cranky often. On days when I haven't eaten enough deer, I'm cranky also. I looked at the time and realized I had a while before school started, so I parked my car and sat on the hood. I left the car on so I could listen to my music. I had "In Regards To Myself" by Underoath blaring through the campus. I looked down at my apparel to see if it was okay. I was wearing a System Of A Down shirt that adorned the "Toxicity" album cover art. I had some baggy jeans on and my new Etnies were strapped tightly to my feet. I had my checkerboard wristband on my left arm and an Assassin's Creed wristband on the other. I guess I look alright...I thought to myself. Suddenly, a blonde guy, who looked around my age, appeared beside me. He still had baby fat on his cheeks, giving him a 'girls adore this guy' look to him. His hair was way shorter than mine, and it was spiked. He held out his hand and smiled widely. "Welcome to Forks!" He said whole-heartedly. "I'm Mike." I looked at his hand, thinking If I should shake it or not. I decided to keep my arms crossed against my chest. "Chap..." I said a little louder than a whisper. He smiled and put his hand away. I saw his posse approaching from behind him. "Chap....that's a weird name. What nationality is it?" "Old English." I said at the same volume as my other reply. "It's actually Chapman, but I prefer Chap." "It means merchant, right?" A girl called from behind Mike. As I nodded, Mike turned around to see his friends. "Oh! Chap, these are my friends." He pointed to two boys. "Eric, Tyler..." He looked at a girl right beside him. "Jessica, who's my girlfriend..." He then turned to another chick. "Lauren, and last but not least..." He turned to the girl that called out the meaning to my name. "Bella." I felt my heart burst open. My tongue swelled up in my mouth as my lower jaw dropped. I started to sweat and my hands shook violently. I stared into her eyes as my mouth started to water. She was the most beautiful creature I had ever seen. Her skin was pale, giving off a faint glow from her skin. Her lips looked as though they were made from red cloth they were so perfect. Her reddish hair was in a ponytail, which I thought suited her well. Any way she would wear her hair would be perfect. Her eyes were beautifully brown, which I liked in a girl. I stared into them, imagining a halo above her head and wings sprouting from her back. I could hear Bella giggle as my trance drifted off. Mike smiled and laughed silently. He said softly, "Cullen's not gonna like this..." Cullen? Who was Cullen? "Edward won't mind if I talk with the new kid." Bella said as she waved to her friends. They must have decided to leave while I was in my trance. "So....do you know anyone around here?" I didn't answer. My mind drifted toward another subject. Edward Cullen. Our families had been enemies for centuries, battling nonstop. Edward had only been around for ninety years, but he was the most hated. He killed our brethren. He was enemy number one. I growled slightly. "Are...are you growling?" Bella said, catching me offguard. "No..." I replied, stopping my growling instantly. She dropped the subject. Thank God. "So, do you know anybody around here?" I shook my head. "I know a few people in La Push." "Really? Me too! Who do you know?" She asked excitedly. "Jacob Black...do you know him?" I asked bluntly. She nodded. "Old friend of my family. Anybody else?" "Sarah Caldwell." I stated silently. She was one of my oldest friends. So was Jacob. "Don't know her..." Bella said, frowning slightly. Suddenly, the bell rang and we both picked our books up. "I'll see you later, okay?" "Cool." I said as we waved. She dissapeared into a group of heads. Wow...I thought. Didn't expect angels in Forks. I walked down the sidewalk and entered a building, officially starting my first day of school. ___________________ Whatcha think? And yes, I did edit this to put Chapter 1 in it for those who read the Preface before I put the 1st Chapter up. I also give credit to Forever Love for letting me use her character Sarah Cadwell.
That was completely awesometastic! He sounds a bit emo, but that fits! Enemies with Edward(my man!), huh? We'll just have to see how this turns out, won't we?
8D OHMIGAWD YOU INCLUDED MY CHARACTER! xDDD I'm laughing right now. That totally caught me off guard. xP It's good so far. I like it. =) Your detailing is great, just post in regular font next time, okay? It was a little hard to read. xD Other than that, you're good to go! Oh, and it's Caldwell, L before the D. ;D
Peeerrrrtty good so far, no offense but i only seen the movie so far so i might just miss some of the stuff if you mention it from the book, wen i get back to school ill ask my friendie if she has it and if i can borrow lolz, but it the only prob waz the font tho
I've read all the books and seen the movie 8 times. Each better than the last. And this story is awesome and it's going to be awesomer than it already is when you finish it. How many chapters do you plan to do?
Chapter 2 "School sucks..." I told Amber, my older sister who's a senior. Our parents died when we were thirteen and fourteen, so she had to take care of me all this time. She looked similar to me, but she had blonde hair. She didn't really support some of my looks on life, but she supported me with a lot. "Well, from what I hear, you had a good morning with the chief of police's daughter." She threw out, cutting up some carrots. She was making one of her disgusting vegetable stews. She tried to stay off the meat, but I can't escape it whatsoever. "Shut up and cook your crap..." I mumbled, taking out my iPod. "Why're you so grumpy all the time? You act like a freakin' eight year old." She said while putting the sliced carrots into a crock pot. "I don't think Bella would find immaturity very attractive..." "Shut up!" I snapped back, growling. I ran upstairs and slammed my door behind me. I plopped onto my bed while staring at my As I Lay Dying poster on the ceiling. I put my earphones in and turned the iPod to play "Back Burner" by August Burns Red. "You can eat when you stop acting like a pussy cat!" Amber yelled up the stairs. "I can't hear you!" I yelled back. "Then why did you respond?" She replied. ".....You're really pissing me off right now." I complained. "That's my job..." She said, ending our conversation. After that, I fell asleep and dreamed for the first time about Bella.... _______________________ I know it's short, but I wrote it in a hurry.
Yeah, you're right--that was pretty short. Never rush yourself to write a chapter. The update can have so much potential and depth if you take your time. Every writer needs to know and understand this, because it leads to a good story. If what you're worried about is whether or not people will keep reading, you shouldn't because the readers that are honestly interested in this story (me included) will come back and read, despite how long it took you to update. Other than that, everything seemed well done. Oh. Thank you for the font. ;D
