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My first poem...thing. Don't hurt me ._.

As I gaze upon this sacred land,
With beams of light shining high,
The Lord of Beasts comes racing down from the skys,
Upon holy golden hooves of light,
The Universe reflected in his eyes,
The creator of the otherworlds.
And I stop to wonder;
How much longer must we endure this torment?
When will our final reckoning draw nigh?


Inspired by Arceus

 

oh, wow... That was a wonderful poem! It had a nice flow to it and it sounded so... so... majestic... I loved it! great job! =)

 

Wow,thanks alot,I didn't expect that...

 

why didn't you expect it? you're poem was great! way better than on my first try... XP

 

I dunno,I guess I didn't expect such a good review xD