These are just a few poems I dabbled into Microsoft Word one day and they've been rotting on there for a long time. I thought that maybe posting them for everyone to see could spare their life a bit longer. I have a lot more poems than these, but I think these are the ones that are SOMEONE Kingdom Hearts related, whatever. My best work? Maybe not. Enjoy them anyway. Memories Something dim, not quite clear Although they hold something dear Can spark thoughts of wonder and awe Or scenes you’d rather not withdraw Can be a great and wonderful thing Or as painful as a bee sting Some people can’t remember at all But to others it comes as a wake-up-call Can be of a loved one, a cherished one Or a hated one, a tie undone No madder what the memory, bad or good, Even though most seem to be misunderstood Memories are a precious thing, A great gift fit for a king. Ok, theres that one. That I used to know Your not the person I used to know Your not the friend I used to know Your not the comedian I used to know Your not the freak I used to know And now you've changed Into something that I don't know And your acting Like someone that I don't know I like the old you That I used to know So please change back Into the person I used to know And that one. Untitled Destiny took its toll And your not here right now Legends are lost, but not forgotten Heroes are slain, but never gone You’ll be remembered throughout the ages Your story will be told far and wide Death is a mere curve in the road A path we all must take. And theres that one too I'm nothing No one’s watching, listening, hearing I feel like I’m disappearing No one’s looking, gazing, seeing Into the person they are being Although I am in clear view I feel like you can see right through No one ever pays attention To the things I’m trying to mention I wave good bye, no one waves back My depressed feelings are starting to stack I’m always right outside of the ring No one includes me in anything No one’s looking, gazing seeing, I’m just an imaginary being Even though it’s hard to bear, I guess I’m really just not there. That was the last one. Uhhhm, I hope you enjoyed my pathetic poetry, and please comment, good and bad!!!
Your poetry is very good. It flows well and the rhyming is excellent. There is nothing pathetic about it. Please keep writing.
Wow, thank you. Usually I try sharing my writing with the only person I can, my sister, and she says its horrible and other bad stuff like that. So, I guess, from only hearing bad things, I start to belive it as well. I kinda need these motivational things like this to keep me going. =D
