Committment...

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  1. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    Committment,
    rather interesting word,
    however the meaning vague,
    atleast that's what I've heard.

    Isn't it funny though,
    how a word can lose its meaning,
    or maybe even mean something completely different,
    depending from whose mouth comes the flow.

    But I never thought you would be one to change it for me,
    I'm sorry I'm not trying to be mean,
    however you just seem to not be committed to the word itself,
    or atleast do not know which meaning upon which to lean.

    Whether its a relationship,
    or maybe even a step down,
    perhaps a friendship,
    even there seems to be on the word a frown.

    You just confuse me so much,
    you say one thing,
    but a minute later its the opposite,
    sometimes its hard to see the words that have a truth touch.

    Whether its words,
    or even feelings,
    sometimes it doesn't seem to matter,
    on either one down comes the foundations and ceilings.

    But I try so very hard,
    not to lose the meaning myself,
    but putting my trust in a committment,
    the meaning I no longer think I can guard.

    -Someone who is rather precious to me...its hard to say...they haven't really been sticking to the meaning of it and in turn I have been hurt a few times...so this poem is a reflection of my feelings as of now and during writing-
     
  2. Wulphie! Gummi Ship Junkie

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    There's not one word of that poem that isn't true.
    And it's really beautiful.
    Nice work.
     
  3. Maka Albarn It's called love

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    I can understand how you feel, I've been there... nicely done with the poem.
     
  4. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    This was absolutely beautiful; I loved it.

    You have a great talent at this; good job. <3