Cold Heart

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  1. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    this is a story about a boy named kam who lives in Hollow Bastion.

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    It all started out as another regular day in Hollow Bastion. Kam, as usual, was hanging out at the Postern with is best friend Zack. "Man, what wouldnt give to be an awsome fighter like that guy Cloud....." Kam said. Zack looked at Kam and smiled. "I could beat Cloud." he said with a laugh. Kam rolled his eyes. "Not even in your dreams. Cloud is unbeatable." said Kam. "Thats a load of bullsh-" Zack stopped before he could finish. A tall man in a black coat had appeared before them and cocked his head twards Kam. "You.........you are more powerful than the others...........you truely are the 'ultimate key'......" Said the man. Kam looked at the man. "Ultimate key!? What are you talking about!?" He demanded. The man laughed. "Come to the study if you want more answers." Suddenly a portal opened behind Zack and he fell through, then the man stepped though another portal. "Zack!" Kam yelled as his friend fell into darkness.

    As Kam reached the study he saw the man sitting infront of a large computer. "What do you want from me?" kam asked as he walked twards the man. The man looked over at Kam "I want you to go to Twilight Town and defeat the heartless at the old mansion. It has collected the most powerful hearts in existance." Said the man. "Who's hearts has it collected?" Kam asked. "Sora, Riku, Kairi, Terra, Aqua, Ven, and Cloud. Oh, and he will have you and your friend's hearts if you fail or refuse." Said the man. "How am i supposed to fight this thing?" Kam asked curiously. "I must freeze your heart. I wont take it, but you wont be able to feel it there any more. You will be neither a Heartless, Nobody, or a Somebody." He expained. "Alright then, do it." He said with sadness in his heart. this will probobly be one of the last emotions i feel. he thought to himself. Suddenly he was struck with a wave are cold, dark energy and he closed his eyes in pain. When he opened them, he could feel no emotion, yet he knew he existed. A keyblade appeared in his hand. "You should get going." Said the man as he dissapeared through a portal. "Yeah, time to go." Said kam as he began his journey.

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    well thats the first part of my story. so how do you people like it? should i continue it or does it suck to much?
     
  2. Axika Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I liked it! It was cool! You should continue! ^^
     
  3. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    thanx!

    ill write the next one soon XD