i think this would look awesome in B&W, and take out the text, or make it smaller, take the gear looking thing out, and replace it with a C4D, and set it to whatever looks best
I know I say this alot but I need to it's looks plain like just a background,render,and text maybe add some more to it and I think you should make the background diffrent it is always ripllely looking but it's ok.
Thats not really a great C4D. It really ****s with the flow. You need to try some new things because all your backgrounds are Filter>Distort>Ripple. Try using C4Ds set to different blending modes, smudging, bluring, gradients, and brushes. Also, get some new fonts, go to Dafont.com and download some from there. And work on blending the render a bit more.
Add creams and light oranges. Also, try not to use C4D's unless they're blended in. I notice you slap them on there a lot (your background for instance).