Traditional Art Cloud Drawing . . .

This is just a drawing of Cloud I did . . it's more on the anime-ish side than realism, it was a bit rushed on the hair . . . but anyway plz comment but nothing like "This freakin sucks!" Okay here it is . . .

 

WOW that good! Better Than I can do I made a Hinata one but not as near as good as that! You got talent!

 

Wow that's incredible.
The shading is perfect.

 

Thanks evrybody :D

 

Very impressive. You accented the eyes really well.

 

thanks, oh and also for telling me how to improve

 

wow - THATS AWESOME!! good job!

 

Great job! ^^

The eyes look a little small in my opinion, but I can't draw faces at all. (Well, I can draw dragon faces, but that's not what I'm talking about.)

 

This is pretty much amazing accept for the chin and jaw. Do you have a DeviantArt ?

 

OMG that is really good i like it wish i could draw like that :)

 

@Xigbar: I do have a deviantart but I only posted like 4 drawings, haven't been on or posted much art in a couple of months . . . It's narutocam05.deviantart.com

@Very Berry: Thanks:D

 

honestly, its an ok drawing, but that does NOT look like cloud, clouds face is much more filled out at the sides, whereas this guy looks like he needs to gain 20 pounds to be cloud. =P

 

Yeah. The face is kinda elongated downwards.

Widen the face a little and you got it. :)

 

Yeah, don't need to really say it again - this drawing is generally well done. :D!

*And*, like said before, the head is extremely elongated. The top of his head to the right, where the center point of the mash of bush is, seems slightly dented. To fix this, drag the hair strands to the left to cover up the small void at the left or just add some seperate strands of hair at the left, to make it look 'even'/'round'. (Meh, not sure if that came out right) The face works pretty well too, though the chin could use a bit of adjustments but it's not a big deal.

The shading's not bad at all, but could be improved - at this stage it's incredibly 'grey' - there's not enough contrast between dark and white in this.

Nice job again.

 

Thats awsome!
The hair is a little weird, but hair like that is hard to draw. Good job. 9/10

 

She's absolutely right ^ (Like always :P)

also I think you should try making the hair more floating, you can see all the lines that doesn't 'match' or flow with each other. A little hard to explain. try to make it look like one piece not parts.

Otherwise good job, and I like the shading :3

 

Alright got it

 

Good job! :) You have talent.