my pen and ink of ciel phantomhive: http://lizzizzy91.deviantart.com/#/d47gzm7 p.s. it took 2nd place in an art contest that i was against ppl who were two years olderthan me. lol. my german castle took 1st. (i only sent in two) it was also my first art contest. for anyone who has not seen my german castle here it is: http://lizzizzy91.deviantart.com/art/German-Castle-208467582?q=gallery%3Alizzizzy91&qo=4
now that's art. I can't draw anything close to that. What i draw always ends up looking like some kind of deformed thing. I'll take a picture of what I drew while waiting for class earlier, but it was only with mechanical pencil. In any case, it's got nice perspective, you got the shapes really well, and it's a bit creepy with the girl holding the skull XD
Oh wow, you do have talent. Is there any other way of you getting them onto the computer because they quality ruins it slightly. I do think the amount of detail gone into this is phemoninal and the proportions are spot on, the first one looks like a professional has drawn it, the only thing I can say about it is that there is a lack of colour. If it's just a line drawing then it's not a huge problem but it would look amazing if you also managed to scan it in a colour it properly. Also, the skull does look a bit big in comparison to her head. But apart from that, wow- I would love to see more of your work, keep it up.
I don't know if the skull is supposed to be a human one, but if it is, there are a couple of things wrong with it. Overall shape is wrong, eyes are weird shape and too far back, nose hole is also wrong. The arms on the girl(?) are also odd. The lower part of her arms start out thin and seemingly grow wider as they go out... Hands are pretty off too. Either her hand has t be impossibly long to connect with her arm. The way her fingers suddenly bulge out is not how a hand works. The fingers themselves are also kind of noodl-y. If you look at where her upper body ends, and then look at her neck, you'll also see that it is too long. It also looks to me as if her eye is a bit too far in, and a bit too far down on her face. From what I can see of her leg, it is very thing, and looks a bit like it's shaped like a cylinder (which, again, is not the shape of a leg). Har to comment on the rest of her body, as all the clothes are in the way. The shape of her hat is OK (except maybe the top), but it looks like it's slightly misplaced, as if it's sliding off her head. While you may be able to do some pretty things with her clothes and flowers, it's very important to get the body right. If you don't, you are basically decorating a flawed figure, and decorations are obviously not going to make it any less flawed. Don't be discouraged, though! Keep practicing. Drawing again and again and learning from your mistakes (and perhaps also from successes) is the only way to get better.
Whoa! Your watercolor piece is so fantastic. It's gorgeous. I just had to say that. And I wish that the quality of the works were shown better digitally. Try to find other ways to get them online because what you have now is fantastic, just the quality. Yeah. Anyway, for Ciel. You've done a great job! c: It's super cute, and I love the concept. I tilted my head a bit though, unless that's what you intended, flip it next time! I like how your lines look. They're drawn very neatly and I can see variety. Plus, the detail on everything is fantastic. Some proportions are quite off, but I personally don't mind because I still like how it looks as a whole generally. Are you planning on coloring this? Because if you do, please share it on here. You have amazing art pieces and this line art is one of them. As for the painting, I actually don't know of what to say. Mainly because the one medium I can't work with to make myself satisfied is paint, ha ha. However, your work is the main reason why words can't even get to my mind right now. It's so beautiful. I love the colours you used and how everything just fits like a puzzle. It's so beautiful. I love water colours and I can only be jealous of you right now. Haha, kidd. But you have a lot going for you in art. Love it.
