Christmas in Twilight Town

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  1. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Since Christmas is coming I decided to write a story of christmas and stuff:D I feel jolly so please enjoy and comment (that's if you want to ) A Fictional story:D
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    excuse me from my words...can't spell some right:S




    Christmas in Twilight Town
    Chapter 1







    The snow was falling from the sky, the soft white snowflake. Falling down landing on the hard cement walk. Millions of snow was falling, it was December the 8th. Christmas was coming, many people were excited and gratefull.

    Roxas layed on his bed looking at the mail he got, mostly they were news from the Sandlot, but there was one from Organization XIII. Roxas threw the other mail away and ripping up the Organization XIII one. He was excited to see something from them, it's been quite a long time. As he took a sheet out from the envelope he flipped it open and read the words from them.

    Dear Roxas, it is "nice" to write to you. From us Organization XIII, we are here to invite you to a sleepover, some members insisted to you to sleep over. As we must know you do have Axel's phone number am I correct? If you want to have a sleepover at TWTNW then call him and answer yes if not... then you shall not call or do anything to communicate us. It'd be quite disturbing if you tried. So yes..that it all.

    By: Xemnas.


    Roxas laughed a little and sat up from his bed and looked around to find his cellphone. Of course Roxas wanted to come! It was his only chance, he'd be spending Christmas with his three friends! Roxas then spotted his phone sitting nearby the tv, it layed there, flat and cold. Roxas jumped out and ran to his cellphone which was white and black. He grabbed it in his hands and flipped it open, he searched through his phone book and saw Axel's phone number. Quickly Roxas dialed the number and put the cellphone next to his ear, Roxas was waiting for the cell to pick up.

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    Axel was in his red flame boxers, with nothing else on topless but wearing boxers. He had his head on his soft pillow, his 3 blankets covered him warmly, keeping him that warm. He was grinned in his dream until a disturbence came. Axel's cellphone was ringing and vibrating at the same time. He moaned and stuck his hand out on his small black draw. He smacked his hand on it around to hit his cellphone. A cold metal he hitted, he grabbed it and pulled it over and flipped his cellphone open and pressed answer, moaning " Huh..Hello?"

    "Wha? Who's this?" he asked all tired with his eyes closed. " Roxas!? Oh hi! Morning buddy and Early morning!" he said sitting up quickly with a grin apon his face. " So whats up Partner?" he asked scratching his elbow. He nodded with a wide smile on his face, his eyes were glowing hearing the words. " So, your coming!" he excitedly said. Axel nodded and continously nodded. " Alright I'll meet you at the Sandlot say... Noon?" he asked standing up. He nodded and grinned " Perfect, thanks partner!" he said. Axel closed his cellphone and threw it at his bed.

    Axel streched and jumped in joy. He was really excited to see Roxas, he accepted their offer and now he's coming ! This was the best or other best day Axel could possibly have! He then ran to his door and jiggled the doorknob to open. It was still alittle busted, but Xaldin said he'd take care of that. Axel opened the door and walked down the white clear hall to go report Xemnas about the acception.
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    Roxas hung up and smiled, he looked around his room and saw his friends walking fast by. Roxas cocked his head and ran to the window, he rubbed it from the cold fog and saw a better look. Strange? Roxas only saw Olette and Pence walking fast. Roxas turned around and ran to his clothes to put them on and see what's up.

    He put up his pants, tightening it with his belt, putting his checker sweater, and best friend wrist band by Axel and Hayner, he put his hand and gloves on along with his boots and jacket. He was ready and set he grabbed his keys jsut incase no one comes in his room sneaking around his stuff. Roxas ran out closing the door, locking it.
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    Roxas opened the door and called out to Olette and Pence. " Pence! Olette! Wait!" Roxas ran to them and looked at them. " What's wrong?" he asked. Olette and Pence nodding. Roxas noticed they had their backpacks on. " Guys?" he asked waving his hand in front of their faces. Olette sighed, " Me and Pence are leaving Twilight Town for the Winter Vacation." she said. Roxas cocked his head. " Why though?" he asked, Pence sighed after and said, " Roxas, we're off to see our family. We're going to celebrate with the rest of the families. So yeah, unless you have a family you can come with us on the train."

    Roxas lowered his head. " Hayner? Wheres he?" he asked quietly. " He's at his familes he left early in the morning." Pence said. Roxas nodded, " sorry Roxas but me and Olette got to go catch our train! Bye!" Olette and Pence ran off leaving Roxas behind. Roxas lowered his head. They weren't going to celebrate together, they were going to celebrate the newyears, play Secret Santa! Roxas closed his fist, with a tear slipping down his cheek. He turned around and went back in the apartment to his dorm.

    He was going to be left all alone this Christmas.




    End of Chapter 1.


    Like it? I did when I was typing this . Please comment if you'd like to:D Poor Roxas.....to me that is. I feel so jolly.

     
  2. Yukai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Aww... Poor Roxas ish spendin' Christmas by himself =<

    Lulz @ Axel XD
     
  3. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    It's a pretty good Idea, but you left some aspects of it unclear and you switch tenses a lot. I had some trouble keeping track sometimes.

    I'd like to see it continue, just maybe don't rush so much and correct the grammatical errors.

     
  4. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thanks:D The next chapter should be up by tomorrow.:)

    Here is the next chapter:D please comment if you'd like!:D






    Christmas in Twilight Town
    Chapter 2





    Roxas layed on his bed his face was in depression, he felt really down. He just layed there facing the carpet, with a sad face apon him. Roxas sighed and heard his cellphone virbating in his pants pocket. He reached into his pocket and pulled his cellphone out he checked to see who it was and saying it was Hayner.
    He flipped it open and put it next to his ear.

    "Hello?" he said, Roxas heard Hayner talking yawning and more. " Yeah i'm fine...what about you?" Roxas asked rolling on to his back on the bed. Roxas nodded at his friends words and sighed in a tiny way. " No, nothing's bothering me, just bored." he said. He nodded and made a tiny growl, he was hearing Hayner yapping all about hs trip there and the food they gave him!
    " Why'd you leave?" he asked, Roxas was getting all serious at the moment. He closed his fist and punched his pillow that was next to him , " no i'm not making it such a big deal!Wha?-" he stopped and heard Hayner talking abit louder on the cell phone.

    " I know but, you should've stopped by to tell me or something! You told Pence and Olette but not me! Listen I-" he sighed and listened to Hayner for a second or two. " Ok, ok! Do I what?" he stopped sitting up with his head cocked, " Well I don't okay!? I don't have a family and now i'm spending my time all ALONE! OK! bye!" he hung up before Hayner said another word on the cell. Roxas looked away and saw his computer, he looked at it for a second and got up and walked to it. Roxas sat down on the chair and saw his friends on his desktop screen, It was them when they were on they're summer vacation. He narrowed his eyes and clicked and pasted another picture into it, just showing a black background, nothing more.

    He logged in and typed out some stuff randomly, pressing any key that his fingers touched, another disturbence came. Roxas' cellphone was vibrating again, he sighed and took it in his hands and flipped it open without looking at whom it was. "What?" he asked in a bad mood.
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    "What? What are you talking about Roxas? I just came to see how's it going over there?" Demyx said fiddling with his left fingers. He heard Roxas apologizing, he nodded and gave a little smile. " It's ok, so you sound down. What's bugging you?" he asked walking over to the kitchen grabbing an apple. "Nothing? You sure?" Demyx cocked his head and nodded with a smile taking a bite on the apple, leaving marks on it, with his teeth.

    "Yeah, so Axel told me you were coming to sleep over am I right?" he asked, making sure he was right or not. " Really? Ok, that's good. Wait tell you come here just to let a hint on you, Xaldin plans on scaring you." he said whispering. " Oh, Xaldin? Pshh not sure-" he took another bite of his apple and chewed while talking, " but all I know is that-mmm- he'll scare you somewhere." Demyx nodded and said, " Okay bud, bye!" he hung up and took another bite of his apple " Man these apples are tasty!" he said amazed. Larxene looked at him giving him a what-the-hec look.

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    Roxas hung up and figured he should bring something when he comes to the Organization's hut to sleepover. Probably a cake or something for them to enjoy. Roxas laughed to himself just saying in his head ' I know they all like cake anyone anytime!'
    Roxas put his jacket, boots and hat on taking his keys to lock the dorms door. He shut the door and locked it. Walking down and he went down the stairs and met up with the exit.

    Roxas though it would'nt be bad without them, but it's kinda sad to him that he'll be celebrating it all by himself.



    End of Chapter 2



    Like it? Please comment if you do:D Next chapter should be up sooner or later.
     
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