Here is a song/rap. I don't know what it sounds better as yet. There should be another 'verse' in there, but i haven't written a second one yet. This is for another friend, me talking to him in this song. Comments would be nice. Choice. What do you do when you spend every day With a knife in your back And no chance for some slack There's no room to breathe Till you slowly can't see Then you think-- Was it me? Did I cause it myself When I threw in the towel Hung my hope on the shelf-- And now it's to late There's a curse you can't break Yet the world will not wait It'll tear you apart Deepen the wound in your heart Unless you find a way out Reach a hand, give a shout Cuz I'm here (don't you know?) Is this the end of your act Will you quit just like that? What do you do (now) What could you do (now) What would you do (now) What should you do (now) Make a choice. You got so soaked up in lies Used enough allybis Get your head straight, Fix your eyes Cuz you mind knows what's right You just can't see it tonight So who'll it be? Will you stay lost and confused Lonely and used In the end you won't lose it you just (Make a choice) What do you do (now) What could you do (now) What would you do (now) What should you do (now) Make a choice. Turned away all you friends Set your time at an end How long will you let this last Shut the pain out from the past (but) What do you do (now) What could you do (now) What would you do (now) What should you do (now) Start anew.
Thank you so much :) Yea I was thinking of splitting the first verse into two, but then it would kinda throw things off for me. I'll work on a second one.
wow, just wow. i loved that :) it sounded basically professional, like something one would hear playing on the radio, it was just that good. cant wait to see if you make a second verse :]<3
Ah wait I edited it! See now it goes verse 1, chorus, *verse 2*, chorus, bridge, chorus! This is the first song that i've ever actually completely finished and is happy with. So yeah, you can read verse two now ^^
