Traditional Art Chibi Zexion's Christmas (draft)

I WILL definately finalize this sometime in the near future. But for the time being, this is wat I have so far.

 

Umm...that was supposed 2 b a picture...Maybe I'll decorate it with a frame or something...

 

XD lol!

That's very cute! You definitely need to color that!

 

O I will...*brings out Photoshop*

 

lol, that is so adorable! :D Shading looks pretty good to me, but in the hair it kinda stoped too sudden instead of a gradient effect, you know? The folds on the outfit are good as well, but I'm missing to see more folds and shade on the bag in his hand - it would give a better sense of shape to it like it was to Zexion.

If you wanted crit about the tree:
The tree doesn't look realistic, in reality it would have way more branches sticking out everywhere, instead of just "triangles" on the edges. Photo reference is useful. OR, if this was supposed to be a plastic toy like looking tree, it still needs some shadows, so shade it some. Love the heart accessories for it though. XD

About the lineart, I noticed that some parts are made with a lighter touch than other parts of the overall picture - like the present is in a very hard tone, almost like it was drawn with an ink pen, while Zexion's outfit is lighter like the pencil. That collides a bit against eachother. To make them more harmonic, I would suggest that you sharpen the lighter lineart as well, on Zexion's outfit (especially the hat) and the tree.

 

Its Cute!!!!

 

lol, that's awesome. You should color this ^_^
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It's cute! The shading looks good, but it could use a gradient effect like cocohints said. The tree could use some shading too, and before coloring it go over the lines with a darker pencil so they stand out more.

 

Wow! So cute! :3 :8 :& Good chibi! 10/10!!!

 

Here's another 1 that I'm also gona finalize.

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