Traditional Art Cat

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Xephos, May 13, 2009.

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  1. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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  2. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Xephos, you are amazing :lolface:

    Did you use a reference?
     
  3. fadedphantom King's Apprentice

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    Okay, this is constructive criticism, okay?

    You did not draw the top one, am I correct? Only the bottom one. The top was your reference.

    SO with that cleared up... the head shape seems to be right, but the face is not angled correctly. The eyes, nose, and mouth should be at an angle because the head is tilted. Also, the one of the eyes is smaller than the other, and the right one is tilted at an awkward angle. I think it doesn't go out enough or something.

    Also, the bottom right half of the cat's chin isn't poofy enough. You made it go in a little bit rather than being rounded like it is in the picture, making the head look a little too small.

    Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll improve :)
     
  4. Hayabusa Venomous

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    Pretty good. Be sure to add more value, so shadows are more visible.

    And stop purring. It's freaking disturbing.
     
  5. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Yes the top is the referance. My bad!

    And how is it disturbing!?
     
  6. Maka Albarn It's called love

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    It just scares different peoples. ^^;

    I agree with fadedphantom though. The angle of the face is a little off, and it's not really alligned with the original drawing. But if you were just looking at it and drawing it in your own style, that's a different story. If you add more shading to it, I bet it would look a little better. Just don't over do it.

    Best of luck! And good job on this one.
     
  7. Advent 【DRAGON BALLSY】

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    Don't necrobump.

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