Hi! This is my very first poem that I have posted on khv. I had a sudden burst of inspiration XD. CnC is always welcome, but please, no bashing. I sit beside you Pointing you in the right direction And yet you don't even notice That I am dying on the inside Am I not the one? What did I do? I deserve your affection Am I not the one? You spot me on the other side of the room Our eyes lock You quickly look away, but I can't stop hoping Mixed signals that I wish were clear "I love you" But recieve no feelings in return Why must the truth be so cruel "You are not the one"
9.8/10. Done. Edit: Forgive me for being stupid when this was put, bad mood that day, so I actually re-read it and I give it a 10/10.
