Can You Hear Me?

Too scared to see
what is real and what isn't
To frightened to tell you
what I really feel

I don't trust many
only a very few
but even those few people
don't know how i feel

Even if I try to explain
nobody hears me
you never try to understand
nobody will listen to me

I feel so alone in this barren world
nobody loves me
you never even asked me
what was wrong when i was sad

Days have passed and nobody
has even said hello to me
or asked me how i was
so now I know I'm all alone

And with this I have learned
that every person in this world
is unable to be trusted
or they will kill your spirit
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i just wrote it for the heck of writing a poem... i don't really feel any of this at the moment... O.o

 

Woah...you are VERY talented... I cant even think up of a poem as good as this... and it'd take me atleast 6 days to write one lame poem.

I admire your talent :)

 

This looks like something I wrote again, especially with the "Don´t trust in nobody" part, but with a slight touch of depression, tell me, are you ripping my style or something? <.< >.>

 

uh... no... O.o i'm just writing whatever pops into my head... i feel weird right now cuz i have the weirdest idea to write about a field... O.o

hmm... maybe a field of dreams... :P :D *gets another idea*

 

Okay... Hope the idea gets okay 8D.

 

the idea turned out pretty good... :D