This is the newest poem by me. I plan on trying to write another one sooner or later. I'm in one of those moods where I'm filled with so many emotions, but I just can't put them into words =\ By His Hand Bending over backwards Crawling on all fours Crying to the sky and stars Hiding welts and sores Praying for a savior Worshiping a blade Rewards for your behavior In bruises of every shade Yelling at the mirror Spitting at yourself Can't explain it clearer Just play the card thats dealt You're knocked out on the floor His nails are in your flesh He was waiting at the door Screaming loud, blood is fresh Now you understand And this is the last straw No longer live by his hand Toss that card and draw Its about an abusive relationship, where you feel like you can't escape it, and you want somebody else to try and save you. Finally when you're attacked so bad that you could have or thought you would die, you know that you've had enough and have to better yourself.
Wow, this is good...not to mention very deep and inspirational...great job. :) Your poetry is seriously awesome! XD
I really like you. You're a very productive new member. You post intelligently and aren't completely grammatically challenged like many of the other new members. And you're not becoming inactive like a lot of them do as well. Anyway. I really like this. In fact, it is one of the best poems I have seen on this website. You did a really amazing job. I like the second verse the best.
