Bury Me ~ Alive

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Shadow, Aug 21, 2007.

  1. Shadow Banned

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    Artistic Literature (better words for poem) I wrote last night:

    Dig....The Grave
    'Cause I'm....Your Slave
    Now..You Dream
    While I...Scream

    What do you think?!
     
    Shadow, Aug 21, 2007
    Shadow, Aug 21, 2007
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  2. SplitOverload Chaser

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    It's not bad, needs more though.
     
    SplitOverload, Aug 21, 2007
    SplitOverload, Aug 21, 2007
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