Yaaay second one this week. I've been practically pooping out these things, it seems like. I need some improvement, and messing around with the Blending Options is my new thing. Help me out here?
Well it seems a bit empty and a little too midtone-y. Play with your exposure a bit. I like the flow you have going, and I'm always a fan of negative space. The lines near the 'fly' text are nice, but I would have liked them placed differently. The fly text itself is alright, but it seems a bit small in a tag of this size. Nice job though, it's good to see you're experimenting a bit.