Britishism's Poems, Lyrics, and Whatnot

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  1. Britishism Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Yeah, I'm creative. I know, right? Me- creative? But yes, I am. I write poems and songs and stuff.

    First- a short song/long musical poem called Paper Thin. It's about a guy who finds out his girlfriend is cheating on him. It's not really suggestive, but if you're 10 or under, it ain't your thing.



    (quiet ukulele and drums)

    If you wanna walk alone at night jus let me know, but if I wanna dream I'll let you go(hold out)

    My girl likes heavy metal
    She wants to sing about her boy
    I tell her oh whatever
    Just don't act so coy(hold out)

    Do you think that I'm stupid
    That I got wrapped up by Cupid
    That I'm to blind to really see
    But you will never make a fool of me

    I know what you've been doing
    The ways your eyes are moving
    Baby I'm not gonna let you win
    Don't you know that I'm not paper-thin*

    (Ukulele replaced with elec. Guitar, drums louder)*
    You're breaking lead*
    He said she said we said
    That were zombies walking loving dead
    And there's discomfort resting in our bed

    *So I'll put this car in drive
    Because your lies won't keep on burning me alive*
    And I'm leaving this household filled with sin*
    Since I'm not paper thin
    I'm not paper-thin
    Oh baby I'm not paper*

    (guitar riff)
    Thin!
     
  2. Roxas&Sora4E Traverse Town Homebody

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    I liked how you inserted where the musical instermants come in. Very cool! Great work! :noworries: