Breathe

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Sumi, Jun 26, 2008.

  1. Sumi suicidé

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    this is about a mother who is diagnosed with depression and is trying to fight it for her twoo boys.
    Breathe

    breathe in the spring air
    run a hand through your hair
    watch the birds fly away
    save your breath for another day

    make the most out of life
    live no longer in strife
    exhale deep down and bring
    from the depths of your heart the spring

    your children see a different you
    in the way your smile is now true
    you live in winter spring summer and fall
    riding bikes and playing baseball

    Your boys Andrew and Johnny sing:
    "Mommy's heart belongs to spring!"​
     
  2. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    yeouch!

    i like it , it rimes perfectly

    i like how, the words can be said quickly almost like a song
     
  3. Sumi suicidé

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    Thanks, a lot of my poems are like that