Break Me Down (No, not the song.)

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Rissy, Jan 31, 2009.

  1. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    Something I made when I found out something horrid about someone else. B|

    Give Something To Scream About.
    I want to Break; Make Me Moan.
    You keep coming Back to me, and I Want you more each time.
    Please, Kill Me in my sleep.
    So I can Kiss You in my dreams.
    Smother Me; so I can think of your Love to me while I stare at everyone in hateful ways.
    Just hold me, keep me warm, make me BREATH.
    I want to talk, make me speak.
    Pain is beyond the picture, but A picture is worth a thousand words.
     
  2. Styx That's me inside your head.

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    This is short but sweet. I'm intrigued by the underlined words but I do see a connection between them. The lines in red are my personal favourites. Great write.